形象、 音，部 I 2005 Expose yourself to Life.

925的鼓 28站台

歌是日本一位歌手根英翻而的。原配上歌曲，十分感人。

但看了中，美美矣，不免有些隔，未我心。

於是提重。

原如下：

Do not stand at my grave and weep ── by Mary Elizabeth Frye (1905-2004)

Do not stand at my grave and weep.

I am not there; I do not sleep.

I am a thousand winds that blow,

I am the diamond glints on snow.

I am the sun on ripened grain,

I am the gentle autumn rain.

When you awaken in the morning hush,

I am the swift uplifting rush

Of quiet birds in the circling flight.

I am the soft starlight at night.

Do not stand at my grave and cry.

I am not there; I did not die.

Joe：

不要站在我前哭泣

不要站在我前哭泣

我不在那；也未睡去

我是吹拂而的情

我是覆雪上的晶

我是成熟子上的光

我是馨撩人的秋雨

你在早晨的中醒

我是迅疾的匆匆

群默默旋的空中

我是夜晚柔和的星光

不要站在我前哭泣

我不在那；也未死亡

…………………………………………………………

中a thousand winds 我想到 If 首歌的

If a picture paints a thousand words,
then why can't I paint you?
The words would never show,
the you I've come to know . . .

因此 a thousand winds 有了 a thousand words 的意

另外想到游的：

梅花句──游(放翁)

道梅花坼，雪堆遍四山中。
何方可化身千，一梅花一放翁。

…………………………………………………

後 Mary Elizabeth Frye 又重新改如下：

Do not stand at my grave and weep,

I am not there, I do not sleep.

I am in a thousand winds that blow,

I am the softly falling snow.

I am the gentle showers of rain,

I am the fields of ripening grain.

I am in the morning hush,

I am in the graceful rush

Of beautiful birds in circling flight,

I am the starshine of the night.

I am in the flowers that bloom,

I am in a quiet room.

I am in the birds that sing,

I am in each lovely thing.

Do not stand at my grave and cry,

I am not there. I do not die.

全似乎照得更平均

但被稀，意消失了。

原的高潮

When you awaken in the morning hush,

I am the swift uplifting rush

Of quiet birds in the circling flight.

被淡化、抹平，

少了激情，成四平八的平庸之作。

P. S.

日文歌是比照改後的文作，由於配上旋律，加上偶和句式的翻效，有人之。日 “千之” 一，本身便有十足的想像和感染力。